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Sunday, May 29, 2016

More Echoes

I had written down an idea for a poem: Echoes in the dark. A little while ago I wrote a poem based on that idea and published it, as you can see. Now I just opened my sketchbook to draw and found a poem written under that same title. So I had written the poem Echoes In the Dark in my sketchbook, forgotten it, and written a new one. Well, here's the sketchbook version:

Echoes In the Dark

Words leave my lips
and as they travel through the air
distorted
silenced
never received

I hear my echo
I’ve become a ghost
they sense me there
but they don’t know

Thoughts
crash on the walls
only echoes
wandering around

Cage
unknown maze
a hiding place
for my demons to rage

The lights broke
reality grew heartless
my mind
nothing but a mess

My existence
echoes in the darkness

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